Of all my Friends

Firday

It was supposed to be the 29th, but I got sidetracked by family.

I'm almost into chapter 3 and my perverted meter went up.

EDIT: Kaneda, I would like to know what you think of the rest of it.

How's it coming along now?

I can see you hovering about...

Get the next bit up! I have nothing interesting at all to read! This left me wanting to read the next bit...please!!

It doesn't matter whether you're halfway through a word, just get up the next bit...you're well over the 29th btw...

You're well over the 29th btw...

Yeah... I know... I started school yesterday...

So here's the end of Chapter 2...

And could a moderator change the name of the thread to "Of all my Friends" ? please?

And if no one will lenny, you find someone who will...

And could a moderator change the name of the thread to "Of all my Friends" ? please?

Done.

School already?!

Sorry to hear that.

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I've finally come to parts that are new for me......

“Hey, can I hit that?” I ask point at her Dr. Pepper.

“Kill it.” She says tossing the bottle to me.

...tell a lie, what exactly is Lemon scene? I had never heard of it until I read this.

You've still got to explain how you hurt your leg:

The driveway leads

And Chapter 2 is repeated (you've got half of Chapter 2 before it starting again (Chapter 2 that is)).



I usually hate books written about real life etc...and ones in 1st person (picky little sod...) but this is one that I'd definitely buy if you succeed in getting it published.

One thing I keep on taking for granted is how over here we're legally allowed to drink at 18. Which usually means if you drive, then you can drink as well. Yet you guys (or at least the majority of you. It is 18 in a few states isn't it?) can't drink legally until 21.

Out of interest, at what age can you guys learn to drive as well? Is it 17?


A great read. Keep it up Wed!!

Well, I've already got a guarantee that it be published. Xerox.com will publish books by how many copies you want. If you order like 10 copies(it's cheap) then they will print you 10 books and send them to you.

Driving, you can learn to drive at 15. You get your license after I think a year of practice. They passed a law where any born in 1990 and up can't get a license till your 18.

You can't drink unless you 21 in any state.

I'd swear I fixed the driveway part.

2 chapter 2's?!?!?!? I'll look into it and update today or tomorrow.

A quick explaination of how he hurt his leg is he tripped on the driveway over a log CAUSE IT WAS FREAKIN DARK! The log kinda stuck into his leg.

Thanks Penguin.

Oh and my friends write Lemon Scenes which are like fan-fics or made-up stories from some anime or video game that was rewritten as sexually explicit material.

Non-Con: Noconsensual
Orange Scene: Masturbation scene
and others... I'll get "Lemon" to tell me.

Driving, you can learn to drive at 15. You get your license after I think a year of practice.

Crazy?!

They passed a law where any born in 1990 and up can't get a license till your 18.

Sanity! Thank the Gods!



That seems rather crazy...letting people drive at 15. So you can drive before you can legally have sex and drink.

You can't drink unless you 21 in any state.

You poor things! I've been told I'm most likely gonna end up as an alcoholic...so by the time you guys can drink, I'll be in rehab...

You must've gone to fix the driveway part, become sidetracked and start thinking you'd done it.

And yes, two Chapter 2's. The first starts on page 20 and stops on 21. The second is from 22 to 33.

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So Xerox.com publish eh...hmmm...

You'll have to see if you can get a bookshop to sell your book. Then ask others in the area etc. and build it up. Then ask the bookshops in the shopping arcades and so on. Maybe get a chain of shops selling them.

When it finally comes over to England you'll have to write a special introduction (or bit at the end) explaining everything...

Try contacting a Literary Agent as well and seeing if they'll get the book published. Don't go for the one though, ask a few agents. Google "literary agent + {your state/area}" and see what their tersm are.

well, I did fix it. I had BIG problems getting it from one computer to this one.

I had to use and old chapter 1 and the new chapter 2(hence the f'ed up ness.)

The book has now become a short story to be ending soon. It is now part of a collection of short stories and poems written by me and a few friends.

It's now called the "Book of Closed Doors"

It will include(Grammarly intact) stories that no one wants to read or hear about. Uncomfortable things like Rape and parental fighting stuff. It will be and inspiration book by fictional example's of strength.

I'm not sure you would like the morals because of the fact it teaches strength through religion.

Which, by the way, have you read any of the bible? If not start on Psalms. Please! I'm very open with other religions such as Wicca and Atheism, but Scientology is just ridiculous. Aliens?

But enough religion bashing.