well, I did fix it. I had BIG problems getting it from one computer to this one.

I had to use and old chapter 1 and the new chapter 2(hence the f'ed up ness.)

The book has now become a short story to be ending soon. It is now part of a collection of short stories and poems written by me and a few friends.

It's now called the "Book of Closed Doors"

It will include(Grammarly intact) stories that no one wants to read or hear about. Uncomfortable things like Rape and parental fighting stuff. It will be and inspiration book by fictional example's of strength.

I'm not sure you would like the morals because of the fact it teaches strength through religion.

Which, by the way, have you read any of the bible? If not start on Psalms. Please! I'm very open with other religions such as Wicca and Atheism, but Scientology is just ridiculous. Aliens?

But enough religion bashing.