Only diffrence is that on page 2 the Client Testimonials Scrolls and is not static like the 1st one, but im not sure if people like that tho .. Tell me what you think.
Well im glad no one reads you books :P I honestly think there is much to change. It looks to plain. I mean I can write the site in 20minutes tops, no to seem like im bashing you, just letting you know how I think of it.
You realize that the second one will only scroll in Explorer, right?
Your random choice of serif or sans-serif fonts for any given area on both pages is disgusting, and centering huge blocks of text like that, especially with the left aligned, images looks fucked up. I think you should learn to design good sites before you try to go into business doing it.