I'm writing a book called Inquisition and it is about a group of teens who get tormented by a family using tormenting tools from the Inquisition. The family "inherited" the tools and have brought them to America. It has a sense of "The Texas Chainsaw Massacre", except a lot of differences. The family believes they are "heretics, witches, and spawn of Satan." So they are trying to get them to confess and even after they do, they usually kill them. But most of this is graphic and I hope to shock many people. I just want to know what do you think of it after I have told you the main bit of it. Just advice on the story and any links to Inquisition torture tools is all I need. I have one, but I need more. There are 10 teens (all are seniors in high school) that will be tormented. I'll keep ya updated as well.
the fact that the people being tormented in the story are around my age scares me but it seems like a good idea.
Well, I killed off one of them. They used the head crusher on her. Then after that they cut off her eyes from her crushed skull and disposed of it. When i write some more, another is going to die with the Water Torture