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Posted 2003-11-27, 01:43 AM
My band's newest song. Lyrics by myself. Enjoy.


"Neutron Ring"


Mechanized writhing.
A cell of solid granite.
Restrained, restricted inside.
Dark and hollow sockets.
Dripping blind and gruesome.
Where vision once was, no longer is.

A cry from the hollows,
Like a child, cold and frightened
Reaches the ears of no person in existence.

Chorus

Horror inside, living only to die.
A purpose of darkness eternal.
Dying genesis, antithesis of existence.
Blackened God of the Zero World.


A halo of black fire,
And the grin of a madman,
Laying waste to hopes and to dreams.

A withered hand, dry knuckles
Grips the hollow darkness
And curses at nothing but a whisper.

Chorus

The Crystal shattered.
Life becomes nothing.
The Crystal shattered.
Neutron Ring.


A Grand Cross of planets.
Moons shattering in orbit.
Bringing the death of resistance...
the end to persistence of life.

Chorus
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Posted 2003-11-27, 02:06 AM in reply to Raziel's post "Neutron Ring"
Pfft, I could write a better song by taking a shit on some paper.
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Posted 2003-11-27, 02:11 AM in reply to Raziel's post "Neutron Ring"
For neutrons to be condenced into a solid piece of matter, such as a ring, they would have to be super compressed. The rings mass would be great...enough sci-fi. Song seems up to raziel standards. Nice job.
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Posted 2003-11-27, 02:28 AM in reply to Raziel's post "Neutron Ring"
mantralord said:
Pfft, I could write a better song by taking a shit on some paper.
Which is a practice that I'm sure you're not all-too unfamiliar with.
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Posted 2003-11-27, 06:00 PM in reply to Raziel's post "Neutron Ring"
Raziel said:
mantralord said:
Pfft, I could write a better song by taking a shit on some paper.
Which is a practice that I'm sure you're not all-too unfamiliar with.
Yes, because I clean my ass after I take shit. From your inferrence, I'm drawn to believe that you do not. Hahaha, shit-ass.
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Posted 2003-11-27, 10:44 PM in reply to Raziel's post "Neutron Ring"
Guud. Very guud.
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Posted 2003-11-28, 12:40 AM in reply to Raziel's post "Neutron Ring"
mantralord said:
Yes, because I clean my ass after I take shit.
I should hope so. All that blood and lube would probably leave stains.
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Posted 2003-11-29, 06:53 PM in reply to Raziel's post "Neutron Ring"
STOP! You are putting horrible visions in my brain!







Raziel, try Roadrunner. I know a guy in a band who just got signed to them. And you are definately better than them.
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Posted 2003-12-02, 05:18 AM in reply to Raziel's post "Neutron Ring"
Roadrunner will probably be the first place we'll try. If not there, maybe Nuclear Blast or Century Media. Thanks for the kind words.
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