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Posted 2003-10-02, 07:21 AM in reply to raven5540's post "Review my story (plz)"
Well let me start with the story. Now i don't know much about console rpgs but the concept of peace miners just doesn't add up to me and i think the crystal should fall from the sky rather than be found in a mine you know like a meteor and you could make the crystals both good and evil, they grow eviler as time passes and the people become dependent on them. the party is classical im guessing the main character meets them on his journey. how about this for a dwarf name foiv foot blogy(foiv foot being his nickname because of his height)
don't stop war otherwise the end will never come
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