Poetry

Profile · Posted 2005-11-25, 02:32 AM

I found poetry.

This is my second ever poem. Rate it, please.

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"Dream-God"
11-25-05

The time is new
Our time is now
If trust is won
Your timely vow

A shadow cast to hide your demons
A waking love to find my dreaming
Shattered thoughts of amber prism
Golden wings on which we've risen

A genocide doth take its toll
A lovers grip to abandon soul
A pack of lies to encompass I
A lying mind wonders only why

For the time is new
and our time is now
Truth in trust sung
Almighty cast a vow

Wed-G · Posted 2005-11-25, 12:22 PM in reply to Wed-G's post "Poetry"

..........*speechless* that's really good. very profound. how long did it take you to write this?

sciencekid

[QUOTE=sciencekidhow long did it take you to write this?[/QUOTE]

Sadly about 10 mins

Wed-G

not bad at all- what style where u trying to capture, if any?

gruesomeBODY

Actually, I have absolutely no idea of any form of poetry at all. Until recently I've never even liked poetry.

I read a poem of my friends and since then I've found its an easy outlet to my feelings.

Wed-G

Well, then keep it up! they're good!

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