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Wed-G 2005-11-25 02:32 AM

Poetry
 
I found poetry.

This is my second ever poem. Rate it, please.
Code:

"Dream-God"
11-25-05

The time is new
Our time is now
If trust is won
Your timely vow

A shadow cast to hide your demons
A waking love to find my dreaming
Shattered thoughts of amber prism
Golden wings on which we've risen

A genocide doth take its toll
A lovers grip to abandon soul
A pack of lies to encompass I
A lying mind wonders only why

For the time is new
and our time is now
Truth in trust sung
Almighty cast a vow


sciencekid 2005-11-25 12:22 PM

..........*speechless* that's really good. very profound. how long did it take you to write this?

Wed-G 2005-11-25 04:38 PM

[QUOTE=sciencekidhow long did it take you to write this?[/QUOTE]

Sadly about 10 mins

gruesomeBODY 2005-11-25 10:41 PM

not bad at all- what style where u trying to capture, if any?

Wed-G 2005-11-25 11:10 PM

Actually, I have absolutely no idea of any form of poetry at all. Until recently I've never even liked poetry.

I read a poem of my friends and since then I've found its an easy outlet to my feelings.

sciencekid 2005-11-26 11:18 PM

Well, then keep it up! they're good!

gruesomeBODY 2005-11-27 01:01 AM

yea i was impressed

Willkillforfood 2005-12-03 04:07 AM

Too many emo kids anyways

Wed-G 2005-12-03 10:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Willkillforfood
Too many emo kids anyways

Say what?

If your calling me emo, fuck that!!!

I come from from a breed of Heavy/Death metal and open-minded people.

I like the color, but I hate wearing black so I just be like me.

sciencekid 2005-12-04 05:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Willkillforfood
Too many emo kids anyways

you better be not calling wed-g an emo kid, dude! just because he expresses his feelings doesn't mean that he is one, there are other issues that are involved when it comes to being an emo. and no, just for the record, before you think i am, im not an emo. I never wear all black, and I don't cut myself.

gruesomeBODY 2005-12-04 06:23 PM

i like emo but i dont dress or act like them

Mantralord 2005-12-04 06:33 PM

you're still emo


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