My set-up...give comments

Ok im tired of making sorces that cant mf worth crap...or die instantly when i get hit...so i have taken a look and at some others and built one and now im wondering if you guys think it is smart...MAXED Blizz, Ice Blast, Ice Bolt, Glacial Spike. 1 in tele, 1 in cold mastery, 1 in warmth my outfit will be Full Tal set (soon as i get ammy) with P chance, P travs, and soj's some day ill be using this sorc to mf stuff well ill get back to you ty