You're both retarded. Skurai only added 4 words, and you added 6. Plus there should be an "of" between "all" and "this".

"Good morning.." The prostitute whispered. "Could you pass me the blunt? Wake and bake is essential after contracting an incurable, festering disease. The prostitutes name - her street name - was Skurai. This young prostitute started off as a street racing pioneer, but soon contracted AIDS, which made everyone lose the game. The game was an intense, mentally challenging outlet for Skurai's drive to be better than horrible but not quite terrible. But Jesus was there to put a stop to all of this nonsense, so he decided