This my crappy build i prolly screwed up alot on... this is me from guessing plz don't call me a noob

20 lightning fury 120 str have enough with items
20 multiple arrow 160 dex
20 guided 200 vit +
1 jab no nrg
6 evade
6 avoid
6 dodge
2 crit strike
1 pierce 1 valk

helm - 15% ias gaze or ptopaz shako
armor - 15% ias shaft or stone or enigma
ammy - cresent moon
rings - perfect ravenfrost and carrion
gloves - souldrainers
boots - gore riders or imp shank
wep 1 - wf
wep 2 and sheild - demon arch and ss or ryme
belt - tgods or nesorys or w/e its called
this is my crappy build tell me if you can fix ANYTHING plz