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Neutron Ring
My band's newest song. Lyrics by myself. Enjoy.
"Neutron Ring" Mechanized writhing. A cell of solid granite. Restrained, restricted inside. Dark and hollow sockets. Dripping blind and gruesome. Where vision once was, no longer is. A cry from the hollows, Like a child, cold and frightened Reaches the ears of no person in existence. Chorus Horror inside, living only to die. A purpose of darkness eternal. Dying genesis, antithesis of existence. Blackened God of the Zero World. A halo of black fire, And the grin of a madman, Laying waste to hopes and to dreams. A withered hand, dry knuckles Grips the hollow darkness And curses at nothing but a whisper. Chorus The Crystal shattered. Life becomes nothing. The Crystal shattered. Neutron Ring. A Grand Cross of planets. Moons shattering in orbit. Bringing the death of resistance... the end to persistence of life. Chorus |
Pfft, I could write a better song by taking a shit on some paper.
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For neutrons to be condenced into a solid piece of matter, such as a ring, they would have to be super compressed. The rings mass would be great...enough sci-fi. Song seems up to raziel standards. Nice job.
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Guud. Very guud.
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STOP! You are putting horrible visions in my brain!
Raziel, try Roadrunner. I know a guy in a band who just got signed to them. And you are definately better than them. |
Roadrunner will probably be the first place we'll try. If not there, maybe Nuclear Blast or Century Media. Thanks for the kind words.
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