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I love her.
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Posted 2003-12-19, 10:39 PM
Without her
I walk alone
Lonely on the earth
Hands in my own

Without her
I lose all hope
Drowning in my tears
Trying to cope

Without her
Warm days run cold
my heart grows restless
my love grows old

The mistakes I have made
Will live inside me
Everynight I cry for her
With myself I die for her
With my heart I will love her

Last edited by vec; 2003-12-19 at 10:42 PM.
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Posted 2003-12-19, 11:43 PM in reply to vec's post "I love her."
Whoa, man. That's like romantic shit. Pretty cool. Don't be surprised if I steal it and give it to my g/f :P.
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Posted 2003-12-20, 01:40 AM in reply to vec's post "I love her."
O.o give me some <3 though!
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Posted 2003-12-20, 12:50 PM in reply to vec's post "I love her."
Here's tha <3!

It's a beautiful poem. Keep up the good work. The last stanza is my favorite of the three. Oooh... *sniffle*
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Posted 2003-12-26, 01:25 PM in reply to vec's post "I love her."
was a great peice of literature (long for poem)
I like your ryhmes mainly because they're not cheap
nice work
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Posted 2003-12-26, 01:39 PM in reply to vec's post "I love her."
The last part reminded me of "I'll be missin you"
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