this hate

sweet melloweds.long befor me.i cried this day w/ out no one to reach..dorped my hopes .. my dreams my goals... but fanily the fear as over come in me.. scared to turn. scared to cry thinkin nutin is gonna be alright.. i should have said i hate u..i would have been alright. but u came bac jus to see me cry.. begin u plz to for give me . but all u gave me was fight. the light was in my eyes when u have strucked down on me... u r sick your treable. your a diskaize. jus millions of lies.. hate all underneath u. but i shall see u pass.. this moment of peace of quite shall last... knownin u r not near me to laugh.

It matters not whether you win or lose; what matters is whether I win or lose.

what.. no this is the frist time i write that one

what do u people think???

Its pretty spiffy, with proper grammar it would be supreme.