The Zelaron Comic

i like it, its cute, i'm sure thats not what you were going for lol, but add more characters, and theres too much testosterone :P

add the 2 vagina's in there as damsels in distress

I am no damsel in destress!

oh fine i'll be one. jessifer you can be in the army, like this badass soldier chick that shows no mercy

w00t.

NOTE: Added warning to the first post!
Alrighty then, here is a completed pg 1, which has been fixed in Syg's birthday thread, and another 3 pages...


NOTEThese pages have been slightly adjusted and added to the first post!

Heh, not bad. King = teh eval. Just a few things:

1. Panel 8 of page one makes the king sound like a pedo. Kinda amusing, regardless.

2. Panel 6 of page two, there's a spelling error. Should be "accommodations".

3. Panel 7 of page three, there's a spelling error. Should be "tying" and not "tieing".

4. Panel 7 of page four looks odd without a background. It's as if Lenny is a flying midget. The perspective in panel 6 seems off, as well.

Very nice! This depicts my psyche well, too.

I love Chruser's character - you've manage to capture his air of zaniness.

And I can't wait to see what I'll do.

i like it, its cute, i'm sure thats not what you were going for lol, but add more characters, and theres too much testosterone :P

As long as I am in it there will always be too much testosterone...

Well, after a long hiatus... I figure I would leave an update! I have had MAJOR artist's block since, like, Thanksgiving... I haven't been able to draw jack... until recently! I finally got that over with, so I am going to try and crank out some more pages, for as long as possible because I am starting UTI in May... and well, 8 hours of work and 8 hour class doesn't leave much time for anything else, considering it is going to be 1 hour to school and 1 hour back.

Cool. Can't wait to see some more.

wait wait wait am i in it?

Yea, you should include some of Zelaron's citizens instead of just the mods and owner

Only active members if that's the case.