Doing it the hard way 2

Looks better, but I still see some anatomical problems at a first glance.

The deltoid muscle seems too flat, and doesn't extend down far enough. It should extend down just about to the same level as the bottom of the chest (Pectoralis Major). It looks more like you put the elbow level there, although a little below it. The elbow level needs to go down further.

Remember the good 8-head thumb rule for proportions for the male, from top to bottom, measured in head units:

1: Head
2: Bottom of chest
3: Navel, elbow level.
4: Middle of pelvis.
6: Bottom of knees
8: Bottom of feet

Furthermore, the nipple positioning is off, both three-dimensionally and anatomically. For such a protruding chest, they look off. The nose has been thrown a bit off in the coloured version as well, as it looks more like a frontal view than a side view. The shaft of the sword got a bit malshaped as well, as you added significant volume to the top of its blade parrying hand defense thing, whatever it's called, without moving the shaft significantly. It kind of looks like the sword shaft has been placed to the side of the actual sword, not in the center as the lineart shows.

Keep practicing, you're improving greatly!