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Posted 2002-10-16, 10:45 PM in reply to thatdude331's post "fusionart team [colab wip]"
Nice, but look at the top. Where the two words "Fusion" and "art" meet looks bad. They shouldn't be overlapping eachother. The color is nice for the top, and circleart coming out of the corner.

The bottom has too much vibrant colors, imo. It doesn't fit very well with the top. The blurring on the person on the bottom kind of ruins it. Make him appear as though he is part of the background (for the blurred part). Don't know how to approach that though (i.e. make him lineart -- for the now-blurred person).

Typo is good. Kind of aims for a focus point. A couple of the words there are spelled wrong; "becouas"..."pohto"? Sounded like whoever did that part of the image was in a rush.

Overall, it's nice. Just some changes to be made and it'd look better. Nice collab. *gives thumbs-up*
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