Slay, dammit, I've told you people the rules in here enough times. If you don't have constructive criticism to offer, don't post it. If you absolutely must give your un-justified negative opinion of the piece, you can just simply say "I didn't like it." Saying "it sucked" doesn't do anything but discourage him from attempting to better his writing skills. Don't do it again, capische?
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