Sum Poem

The darkness coming quick to your eyes,
the rope coming closer to your neck,
the knife coming to your wrist,
the darkness consumes your soul,
you will live forevermore as a brain dead cadaver,
suicide rots your soul and bannishes you from heavan or hell,
to sit through eternity as a meaningless form of life,
to be despised,
to be forgotto have commited suicide.


This is just somthing i thought up one day while thinking of my dead family members and the people i know who have almost commited suicide and what that means. Some people see it as the easy way out and some as blasphemy. But i see it as eternal destruction of your soul. Plz comment on the poem and tell me how crappy it is.