My new game

Hello Everyone.

The game is called 'Evil Calling'. Is that already a name of something like a film or game? It uses Tales of the World - Narikiri Dungeon 2, 3 and Tales of Phantasia graphics. I have used the same items and currency as in the Tales of series but it isin't a sequal, next Tales of, or anything like that. It is MY game. I'm posting some screenshots. Give me you opinion on the look and beggining storyline please. I need them! Rate it like, Towns: 7/10 and stuff like that. Hopefully i'll put a link to the demo up soon. Depends. Thats if i get enough done.

Story: A girl and her brother were raised by there mother in a small town in a huge forest. When there father died in a woodcutting accident, there mother never forgave the people who killed her husband. The village was a village of bandits, though the boy and girl didn't know that. She swore that she would destroy the bandit village and set off with her children. Years passed and the boy and girl grew into teenagers. One day, their mother was captured by the bandits and taken away. The boy and girl grew up alone, seprated from there mother. That brings it to the start of the game. The boy and girl hear that their mother has escaped and is at the small village of Muraton over the desert. They set off. Upon arrival they discover the village destroyed and the girl faints. She awakes in the village but in the past. She finds her mother and her mother tells her that her magic brought her here and that when she returns to her time she should run south away from the village. The girl has a hidden power which only her parents and the leader of the bandits know. She has the power to open a gateway for the god of evil or light to come through. This depends on what her soul is. Light of Dark. Thus begins Evil Calling.