My new game

Hello Everyone.

The game is called 'Evil Calling'. Is that already a name of something like a film or game? It uses Tales of the World - Narikiri Dungeon 2, 3 and Tales of Phantasia graphics. I have used the same items and currency as in the Tales of series but it isin't a sequal, next Tales of, or anything like that. It is MY game. I'm posting some screenshots. Give me you opinion on the look and beggining storyline please. I need them! Rate it like, Towns: 7/10 and stuff like that. Hopefully i'll put a link to the demo up soon. Depends. Thats if i get enough done.

Story: A girl and her brother were raised by there mother in a small town in a huge forest. When there father died in a woodcutting accident, there mother never forgave the people who killed her husband. The village was a village of bandits, though the boy and girl didn't know that. She swore that she would destroy the bandit village and set off with her children. Years passed and the boy and girl grew into teenagers. One day, their mother was captured by the bandits and taken away. The boy and girl grew up alone, seprated from there mother. That brings it to the start of the game. The boy and girl hear that their mother has escaped and is at the small village of Muraton over the desert. They set off. Upon arrival they discover the village destroyed and the girl faints. She awakes in the village but in the past. She finds her mother and her mother tells her that her magic brought her here and that when she returns to her time she should run south away from the village. The girl has a hidden power which only her parents and the leader of the bandits know. She has the power to open a gateway for the god of evil or light to come through. This depends on what her soul is. Light of Dark. Thus begins Evil Calling.

And some more. The title is using a title pic from anouther game, thats because i aint got a scanner so i can't put my own art in. I thought that suits it nicely though lol/

The story sounds pretty good... But how did the husband die? You said it was a woodcutting accident, but then you said people killed him. Well, even if people did kill him, it was an accident right? So why is the mother mad?

good point. Perhaps i put that wrong. There father was killed in a woodcutting accident. Some people were cutting. And when the tree fell it killed him. There mother suspected a murder and got angry but that really isin't important coz, 1. it's just background story and 2. thats like 10 years before the game starts.

And btw, PLEASE don't knick my idea, it took me 2 sleepless nights to work that out!

Omg! Zelos! Xd Xd Xd Xd Xd Xd Xd

Wow, Zelos, lol

Oooooh! Haven't seen you around for a while. Howdy-do, caj?

And don't worry about people stealing the idea - it's not something that's sone here. At least, I hope it isn't.

hi, yea. I had like a year of no computer lol. Then wen i came bak on my rpg maker i remembered zelaron. (soz i'm trying 2 eat a ice lolly at the same time lol )

so, wat do u think of the game lenny?

Anynoe...

sounds awesome