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Posted 2004-06-05, 10:48 PM in reply to Aurvian's post "Story of Kauri"
*Exercise 1(above)= In three paragraphs describe somethin that you've experienced and make it fiction
(I described when me and my enemy got into a fight and he through a brick at my head = but since this is a fictionous story I made the enemy his brothers and a fireplace, instead of a brick he got hit with a big peice of hot coal.".
Exercise #2

Chapter 2 The Doctors Office
Shapes of Rectangles and Sqaures hiding from light appeared as he tried to open his eyes, as if physically fighting death himself he tried to wakeup but could not seem to do so. An Unknown figured loomed over him, dark mysterious and pushing him down. With extra hands the shadow forced a liquid down his throat. Death was toying with him, experimenting doing satan's work in order to find gods secrets. And he could feel the substance he was forced to drink, as its cold body slithered down. Down from his throat to his Stomach. But as The two demons let there gaurd down he was able to push his eyes ajar. Far enough to where he could see a mark on its head engraved in red, but he couldnt see what it displayed only its color, a tint of red. With all this he didnt happen to notice that he was laying on something soft, thin, and smooth; it was somethin wonderful within this heap of punishment. Not even the smell was delightful, an aroma that was bitter as a grumpy old women and taste like Cherries, Rotten Fish, Ear wax, and Olives . He put his hand to the side, flinging it over as if he were bonelss or just piss drunk. He could feel somethin beside him with teeth that cut him without chumping down. Seeing he tried to exscape the two aliens immediatly rushed over.
"Doctor," He felt the nurses soft hands lift his arm, "Hes done it again," and the tender bandage as they wrapped it around his arm.
"De'Lyla its only an effect from the medication we gave him to stop the bleeding and make sure he doesnt get an infection" Then his eyes bolted open giving him view of the wooden ceiling, silk sheets the thorned plant beside him and then before his eyes shut they captured a picture of the eyes of the nurse beside him.

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