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Posted 2008-10-20, 08:39 AM in reply to Draco2003's post starting "NOTE: Added warning to the first post!..."
Heh, not bad. King = teh eval. Just a few things:

1. Panel 8 of page one makes the king sound like a pedo. Kinda amusing, regardless.

2. Panel 6 of page two, there's a spelling error. Should be "accommodations".

3. Panel 7 of page three, there's a spelling error. Should be "tying" and not "tieing".

4. Panel 7 of page four looks odd without a background. It's as if Lenny is a flying midget. The perspective in panel 6 seems off, as well.
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