You shoudl change the title of this to highschool essay's delete this post and sticky it - everyone should contribute their highschool essay's so that kids that are going through the dreaded 5 paragraph essay or the other kind (forgot) will have a quick reference, or auto essay i could of only wished this was here when i was trying to write these. For my teachers most of these were a-c papers none of the 3 failed. Of course your own spin on things would be good, allowing you to make it sound like your own and changing things here and there.