I tried to get through it, but to me it all just came out as words arranged to rhym. I was never a poem person, but I'm trying to understand them more, considering I've been reading alot of plays.

But, since I couldn't really tell what was going on, I can't say much. It's obvious you put work into it, and I'll probably read it again later and understand it. So for now, I'll just rep. you for hard work.