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Posted 2006-01-31, 05:06 PM in reply to Lenny's post starting "You've got to get yourself a special..."
IMHO, gawking fits best. She's just a teenager, and gawking is what people in general do when they come across something they don't know how to react to, as in this case.

...Besides. If I made the beginning too wordy, the readers would be severely disappointed later on in the story. And it's already shaping up to be that way.
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