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Dumb ass Poem.
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Posted 2004-08-03, 12:47 AM in reply to
D3V
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"The ban of Grav is what I yearn If..."
D3V said:
The ban of Grav is what I yearn
If only the world would turn
The slaying of Slim would be so great
If only the world would turn
Slaynish slaughtered, cow style
If only the world would turn
I can't be a part of this proximity
Why won't the world, turn for me?
"I can't be a part of this closeness"
That just doesn't work. The world DOES turn, so your B lines aren't really making sense either. the last line should really be "If only the world would turn.. for me.."
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