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Posted 2003-10-28, 05:14 PM in reply to Chruser's post "Santa Sniper"
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Chruser - Nicely done! I really like the motion and the composition of the scene

A couple of tips though

When composing a scene try to create some sort of mood or feeling. An example of this would be a dark alley, drawing shadows on top of everything makes it dark and creepy. Another thing I've noticed is that you're losing some of the definition and became blurry at some areas, such as the body of the sniper and some of the... Pipes? Also at the tip of some pipes you're also losing alot of volumes and this is where the straight thing I told you comes in, if it was straight this volume losing would not be an issue.

Nevertheless, great work, alot of improvement from your other stuff You castle was a bit better though (excluding the messy trees ) But keep workin at it, you've certainly talent for scene composition (I've seen your 3d work You can do it)
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