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Penguin 2003-12-13 01:45 AM

Christmas Eve
 
Sun setting

Moon rising

Beautiful stars of shimmering light

A bird’s shadow

The light blue painted house

The small iron fence

An open gate

A chilly breeze

A small flower garden

A girls doll in the grass

Silent footsteps

The rosewood door

A beckoning crow

The opened door

A Christmas tree

Christmas cards

Three stockings hanging from the mantle

Large window

No curtains

A lifeless tree

The staring crow on a branch

A bowl of cookies

A child’s note

A picture of a young girl and her mother and father

The long dark hallway

A staircase

One creaking step after another

A bedroom door opens slowly

The cautious man

Time slows

Fear

A gun

A pleading face

The execution

A woman screams

Second door begins to open

A crying girl

The puddle of blood

A flying crow

A low-pitched call

The staring crow

Hysterical woman crawling

Over the body of her husband

Confused and weeping child

A lasting hug

A gun

Praying mother

Weeping child

A whisper

Tears

Time slows

Execution

Silence

A beckoning crow

The staircase

The long hallway

The front door

An open gate

Beautiful stars of shimmering light

Full moon

A scream

Breathless

The bedroom

Christmas Eve

A dream

A nightmare


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Yeah.... heh weird =/ I don’t usually write anything so Its not good but I was bored.... And it’s nearly 2am...

RoboticSilence 2003-12-13 02:37 AM

It reminds me of something... but I can't seem to put my finger on it.

Mydogisyourdog 2003-12-13 03:45 AM

kinda like that one song.. umm ... Cake? i think thats them, the racing for the cup. . "hes driving for whom he still burns... HES GOING THE DISTANCE. hes going for speed. Shes all alone.. all alone in her time of need..." blah blah blah... that song

vec 2003-12-13 06:00 AM

i like it for some reason. the beat like someone is walking through the house and witnesses these events one step at a time and pauses in fright or something.

it is good stuff.

sheerx 2003-12-18 04:59 PM

nice job penguin
interesting idea.. I enjoyed it

Jessifer 2003-12-18 05:08 PM

Woah. That's hella depressing. o_O Kinda scary too. Imagine that actually happening to ya. Wow...

I like it, though.


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