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Skurai
2009-08-06, 02:21 PM
"Antelopes do it, Lobsters do it..."

I was watching Dr. Phil, when I heard someone say thing...
....
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At first I lol'd because Corey's a Lobster. Then I lol'd because lobsters aren't mamals...

D3V
2009-08-06, 02:22 PM
Sources.

Skurai
2009-08-06, 06:52 PM
Sources.

...? Umm... Dr.Phil?
<_<'
It was some blonde bitch! Let me check the website...

Mantralord
2009-08-07, 05:27 PM
~*all mammals fart*~

Skurai
2009-08-07, 10:46 PM
~*all mammals fart*~

Lobsters do it, dogs do it, humans do it...

Mdselctr
2009-08-08, 12:07 AM
Lobsters do it, dogs do it, humans do it...

If you intend to construct a commencing series, at least
use a coordinating conjunction in your last member; or,
the last member of the series should lead to a climax.
Unfortunately, the fact that humans do 'it' (who's ante-
cedent is 'all mammals flirt') leaves the reader expect-
ing more. Therefore, your sentence has a comical affect
that makes one wonder if the outcome was intended. A more
definite sentence would follow the law of parallelism.

Mantralord
2009-08-08, 01:11 PM
If you intend to construct a commencing series, at least
use a coordinating conjunction in your last member; or,
the last member of the series should lead to a climax.
Unfortunately, the fact that humans do 'it' (who's ante-
cedent is 'all mammals flirt') leaves the reader expect-
ing more. Therefore, your sentence has a comical affect
that makes one wonder if the outcome was intended. A more
definite sentence would follow the law of parallelism.


This is a very informative and in-depth paper on mammal farts. You should publish it to the scientific community.

Mdselctr
2009-08-08, 03:56 PM
This is a very informative and in-depth paper on mammal farts. You should publish it to the scientific community.

But it is not on topic; in fact, it
is a response to grammatical errors.

Skurai
2009-08-08, 06:53 PM
But it is not on topic; in fact, it
is a response to grammatical errors.

Are you implying my grammer has errors?