your opinion on these lyrics.

[kyeruu]

lyrics on this song my friend and i wrote, song called: peace at hand, betrayal at yours.

Did you come here to kill? or did you come here to die?
And did you really think that angels would descend from the sky?

Hide the children free of sin
To face the blades of fury
Protected only by our skin
To wish we never had this faith.

(chorus)
Now raise your glass in cheers
To never know where we came from
only how we got here.

I've grown indifferent, sideways
betrayed, abandoned
like if you would really want
all this that i provide?

(random screamo section)

Shut up, i don't care
(i need no life)x2
shut up, i need this
(may you fall)x2

(43 second guitar solo >=O)

(chorus)

(outro)
(ending verse)
Your words, irrelevant.
My thoughts, Mindless.
The aura from your deprivation.

Seeps me alive!

[quikspy67]

They sound pretty decent, it would help me alot to judge it more with some music in the backround though, but good stuff.

[Thanatos]

I'm not going to state my opinion because I'm biased when it comes to songs like this.

[kyeruu]

Knowing you thana, that's a gift :P

[quikspy67]

Don't you mean everyone on the forum?

[kyeruu]

Touche..............

[Tuttifrutti]

it sounds like you and your friend are like suppressing your anger or something and its coming out in your lyrics lol