poem about gruesomeBODY's friend who passed on

[sciencekid]

as it says on the title, here is a poem about gruesomeBODY's friend who passed on recently. hope you all like it and post your opinions please. :)

Deceased Friend

You've lost your friend,
To some unknown condition,
Leaving you behind,
All the time wishin',
That he would come back,
Healthy as ever,
To live on this earth,
and be near you forever.
He is gone now,
But not from our memories,
Gone because something,
Caused his heart to seize.
The best thing to do,
Is to remember him as he was,
Full of life and vigor, too,
Not as someone caught in death's jaws.

[platnum]

That was very nice o fyou to write that. Awsome work.

[gruesomeBODY]

Science had sent it to me already and like i said before, its very moving. Thank you.

[Demosthenes]

Good poem. Very powerful ending.

[Lenny]

Wow. It is moving, like people have said.

Nice of you to write it for gruesome too.

[sciencekid]

well, sometimes i just get this strong feeling to write something, most of the time for someone else. and thank you for your opinions.

[Curian]

I usually hate poetry but this is awesome.

[sciencekid]

I feel so important! :D :grin: :D thank you all! i may post more from my cache of 20 odd some pieces of poetry sometime in the future. i may also publish them too!

[sciencekid]

ummmm but first, do any of you know how i can make a thread only visible to members and not visitors?

[Lenny]

It's only the admins that can do that. And I think they can only make certain forums invisible. Take the Flame Forum for example, it doesn't show if you're not logged on.

Hey, you could make the thread in the Flame Forum and hope you don't get abused. :p

[sciencekid]

lol, nice thought, but no way in heck, ill just ask if they can make this thread invisible.

[Lenny]

You can ask, but I don't know if the Higher Ups will. It should be possible, this is a vBulletin board after all, not an itsy bitsy IPB one.

[sciencekid]

ok i asked and wet wired said that you can't do that on a per thread basis. dang. o well, ill just pm you ppl or send attachments through email w/ the poems i guess.

[gruesomeBODY]

thats cool dude thanks

[sciencekid]

come to think of it, how about you guys email me your email addresses if you want to read more of the poems, ok(include your screen name also so i know who im sending it to)? you can also reach me any other way through im or something. thanks ppl for the interest!

[Willkillforfood]

You don't expect such things from this group of people ...well, at least not from Grav.

[gruesomeBODY]

Yea, that is a true statement.

[Grav]

And they call me emo.

[Willkillforfood]

Nah, they call you heartless you bastard! Don't listen to him ...he makes me do bad things. Good poem.

[sciencekid]

thanks, there's more where that came from lol.

[gruesomeBODY]

And they call me emo.
God, everything to u is emo this and emo that. Why dont u just find someother phrase to describe things cause peoples emotions are not alway emo this and emo that. Its just because we care more then u do.

[Lenny]

How about "emotive"? We talked about "emotive" language in English today. :)

[sciencekid]

is that like a car w/ emotions? lol

[Lenny]

Oh. My. Word.

I actually chuckled at that... :p

[Willkillforfood]

Emotive junction, what's your function? :o