it started

[Mydogisyourdog]

this is my first attempt to ever write. dont be too harsh.

It started when i met you,
when i fell for those eyes of blue.
It started when i had you,
when i felt love i never knew.
It started when i lost you,
when my anger grew
It start when i forgot you,
when my heart broke in two.

[Hades-Knight]

WOW!!! thats impressive for first time!!! good job

[vec]

yesh, gj. i don't know how to comment on poetry or anything, but gj.

[Chruser]

Always check poetry and literature for incorrect grammar and typos. Nevertheless, it's a rather good poem for being a first-time writer, although I personally think the broken heart theme has been outdone already.

[Jessifer]

This was only your first time? I'm pleasantly suprised. It's a wonderful poem. Keep it up. ;)

[sheerx]

the obvious mood of this thread is correct.
Was pretty good for a first time poem
yet to write my first poem so your better off than me =)
gj