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vec
2003-12-18, 12:55 AM
Look at those soft beautiful eyes
Like a dream to wake up and cry
Lips of soft pink beautiful lies
I hear your voice inside my mind
Your voice scraps throughout my head
Killing me softly til I am wonderfully dead

`Insolence`
2003-12-18, 01:52 AM
Killing me softly til I am wonderfully dead

I like it, especially this line :)

Jessifer
2003-12-18, 04:08 PM
I like this one as well. ^_^ Very good job. Keep it up.

"Lips of soft pink beautiful lies" is my favorite line.