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Jessifer
2003-11-19, 04:04 PM
Betrayed


The ones I loved so many years ago,
A dagger through my heart, seemed not to care.
The twisted words and truth told from the crow,
Revealing cries that stripped my essence bare.
Cold eyes full of hatred that seem to stare
At not the person that’s always been near.
Completely shattered the one thing I cared,
Deep trust that was once something I held dear.
I only wish that everything would clear
So this childish grudge would finally end.
I could carry on my life without fear
With all of our differences set to mend.
But know even if this would never cease
Love remains that will refuse to release.


© Jessica W.

Shining Knights
2003-11-19, 05:19 PM
It matters not whether you win or lose; what matters is whether I win or lose.

Jessifer
2003-11-19, 05:29 PM
Right. Okay. Whatever. :wierd:

Kuja`s #1
2003-11-19, 06:03 PM
I read that somewhere else before...

Jessifer
2003-11-19, 06:25 PM
I'm certain that you haven't. It's written in Shakespearian Sonnet form, however.

Raziel
2003-11-26, 01:24 AM
Usually, as long as you have the copyright symbol on it, the copyright status will hold up in court.

Dan XIII
2003-11-26, 02:16 PM
people shouldn't steal other people's ideas anyway.

Jessifer
2003-11-26, 08:06 PM
Who's stealing?

Dan XIII
2003-12-04, 01:10 PM
Who's stealing?I'm not saying you stole someone's idea.I am saying that if people didn't steal other people's ideas then copyrights wouldn't be needed.

Eddie_Perez
2003-12-04, 01:26 PM
Yeah, well. Go live in Mars or something.

Valmar
2003-12-04, 03:54 PM
I believe the correct way to say that would be, go live ON mars.

Jessifer
2003-12-04, 05:58 PM
Blast. You beat me to it.

Valmar
2003-12-04, 07:47 PM
I beat you to everything except wrighting quality poems or songs :\

Shining Knights
2003-12-05, 11:19 AM
It matters not whether you win or lose; what matters is whether I win or lose.

Jessifer
2003-12-05, 11:23 AM
I beat you to everything except wrighting quality poems or songs :\

Should I be hurt or honored?

Valmar
2003-12-05, 12:02 PM
Your choice, and shinto.. i could really care less about corrections, i just dislike eddie for some reason.

Jessifer
2003-12-05, 08:17 PM
I chose to be apathetic.

Dan XIII
2003-12-06, 11:42 AM
I don't want to live on Mars.