write haikus

[Kuja`s #1]

the cool, crisp air blows
animals rush to get food
winter aproaches

[Medieval Bob]

Do not delete this.
All haikus are relevant
In the Haiku thread.

[Jamesadin]

You see, this thread wouldn't be split, becuase its intentions are to write haikus, not explain them.

[Medieval Bob]

That's not a haiku.
You sould rethink your post James.
It does not belong.

[Jamesadin]

Im sorry massa,
I did not mean it one bit,
Will you forgive me?

[Medieval Bob]

I can forgive you
Just remember to shape up
No slackin next time

[khwiii]

James is Bob's bitch.
Bob always seems to own James.
Poor, pitiful James.

[DrowningOnAir]

James split the old thread
What a jackass I'm so mad
de sup mod him NOW!!!

[Medieval Bob]

Khwiii, you need practice.
You're wrong about syllables.
Your first line has four.

[khwiii]

Damn, I cannot count.
Thanks Bob, for pointing that out.
I will go and pout.

[Kuja`s #1]

haikus do not rhyme
please rethink your next poem
or I will be mad

[khwiii]

You are incorrect.
Haikus certianly can rhyme.
Please check out this site.

http://www.ugrad.cs.ubc.ca/~cs100new/haiku/overview.html

[Kuja`s #1]

In dictionary
it says haiku is an un-
rhyming jap poem

[Jamesadin]

James split the old thread
What a jackass I'm so mad
de sup mod him NOW!!!

Be very calm,
for it will not hurt too much,
when I ban you gently.

[khwiii]

No one here said to,
Just write traditional please.
So its not my fault.

[Wiccan][V][asta]

Why fight over it
It is a gay Japanese
Form of poetry


Freezing cold cracks limbs
Do you think you can last long
Frozen burial


Burning flesh rancid
Test of heat mind starts to boil
Skin starts to shrivel


Feeding off of sceams
From the mutants created
Infamous angel

[DrowningOnAir]

James, ill just eat you
what will you do then? eh? eh?
gently in my tumm

[Jamesadin]

gently in my tumm

Have to admit, that was pretty funny.

[Eddie_Perez]

Eh Eh Eh Eh Oh

HeHe Haha Oh My God


Ha Ha Ha Ha Eh?

[Kuja`s #1]

I return to zel
much horror I will create
I suggest you flee

[Wiccan][V][asta]

Damn you, you asshat
Please leave for good you wanker
You should kill yourself

[Kuja`s #1]

How uncivilized
please wash out your mouth with soap
your mom is a ho