Some random female (Nudity)

[Chruser]

Well, I've been spending a few days on and off to finally attempt modeling my first character ever, and this is what I have so far. Any feedback would, as always, be greatly appreciated. Oh, and some ideas for clothing wouldn't hurt too much either... :)

http://www.firedragon.com/~lwg3d/wip/2003/05/09-483106_tn.jpg (http://www.firedragon.com/~lwg3d/wip/2003/05/09-483106.jpg)

http://www.firedragon.com/~lwg3d/wip/2003/05/09-483136_tn.jpg (http://www.firedragon.com/~lwg3d/wip/2003/05/09-483136.jpg)

http://www.firedragon.com/~lwg3d/wip/2003/05/09-483197_tn.jpg (http://www.firedragon.com/~lwg3d/wip/2003/05/09-483197.jpg)

(Yes, silicone is easier to model)

[Randuin]

www.fineart.sk
that's some curved spline dude, and real smooth back :)

[Titusfied]

Her ass is just a tad too big (or maybe it was the perspective). Either way, it looks cool so far. What other motions does she have, they are a little too restricting to have any decent ideas. Give her a tight black tank top and loose army cargo pants with military boots. She'll look like one bad ass motha!

[Randuin]

nah, chruser is not l33t enough for clothing yet ;)

["CRØNîC-KîLLå"]

nice tits and body all around, the ass on one cheek looks a bit lumpy, and the face id have to say you should work more on... it looks good but for a female YOU create, you would want her to be the sexyest thing hehehe...

[Randuin]

chruser... why do you even bother getting criticisms here? so you can be praised? =\ :P i go to cgtalk for that! lol

[Shining Knights]

It matters not whether you win or lose; what matters is whether I win or lose.

[Chruser]

Her ass in the back needs more shading, and it needs to be a bit smaller. The front needs to be bigger. Since she is in a slight drop/stance pose, though thats what I think. Also, is depends which way the light is hitting her, from the left the back ass would be lighter, and the front ass would be darker. From above, the side of the back ass would be darker, since the hands would hit it, and so on. Try to draw her on paper, look at the picture, and improve.

Uh, yeah...

Maybe you've missed the fact that the program window is called "Modeler" meaning it's for modeling, not lighting?

:rolleyes:

[Acer]

its cool, they dont know that :P

Its looking pretty good atm.

[Shining Knights]

It matters not whether you win or lose; what matters is whether I win or lose.

[JiDDaR]

looks very nice and the ass isn't that bad ...

[Acer]

looks very nice and the ass isn't that bad ...

I agree, I dont see the problem

[Chruser]

The problem I see myself is that the back of the pelvis bone doesn't stand out well enough. It looks like the area between the buttcheeks is connected with the actual spline, but that's an easy fix.

[Acer]

I didnt even notice that

[natedowgg]

i like the ass stop criticising it damnit!^_^

[Randuin]

neck's a little flat no?

[Acer]

the stomach is flat above the belly button up to the breast.

[-Spector-]

arms look a lil to fat (top view) Just my opinion...

[-Spector-]

arms look a lil to fat (top view) Just in my opinion...

[JiDDaR]

:( ok randuin.... oh sry I did it again

[Chruser]

I don't know how long it has taken me, a couple of hours on and off over a week of spare time. 14 hours in total perhaps, I'm slow. :)

[Senesia]

Give us some follow-up on that. =)

And how much time did you spend on the latest article in Chruser's Corner? ^_^

[Chruser]

About 12-15 minutes. :D

[sir.dennis]

Pretty good, I wish my comp was good enough to do that.

[natedowgg]

i like it but im no critic of cg so good work chruser ^_^

*thread cleared of spam*

[Randuin]

sir.dennis, your computer is better than a 500celeron with 64mb of ram? then you can do that

[Chruser]

Here's a test render for you:

http://www.zelaron.com/gear/Solset.jpg

She's a bit cross-eyed, but that's a very easy change. Hair, a more natural-looking pose and even an environment is next. :)

[JiDDaR]

looks very nice. only the head looks freaky ^_^

[Acer]

As I said, great job... good luck with finishing touches

[CAClark]

Looks pretty decent so far, I think the shape of the head is a little odd, and the arms taper from thick to thin too much also.

Otherwise, a fine progress.

Cheers

Craig

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Artist - Modeler
Argonaut Sheffield
www.f-nine.co.uk
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[LiveWire]

Here's a test render for you:

http://www.zelaron.com/gear/Solset.jpg

She's a bit cross-eyed, but that's a very easy change. Hair, a more natural-looking pose and even an environment is next. :)


I knew you where going to use my sisters pic >_<

[WetWired]

Looks pretty decent so far, I think the shape of the head is a little odd, and the arms taper from thick to thin too much also.

Otherwise, a fine progress.

Cheers

Craig

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Artist - Modeler
Argonaut Sheffield
www.f-nine.co.uk
-------------------------------------Wow! How did you end up here? :D :D I hope you stay.

BTW, you can put your sig in your sig using the User CP.

[CAClark]

Sure I'll hang out some on the forums :)

Cheers

Craig

[Randuin]

mod him :P

[JiDDaR]

mod him :P

agree but than we've to mod you(again) too :P

[tacoX]

Fucked up ass -- sorry >_>

[!King_Amazon!]

Chop off her head and she=teh sexx0r.

[Randuin]

lol i remember when i made mod... it was fun

[JiDDaR]

lol i remember when i made mod... it was fun

LoL yes 4 you :P

[Randuin]

you weren't even here so shut up :P

[Anime-Otaku]

the top down view her breasts look joined... might wana fix that. also how old is it supposed to be ? that could help with a few things if u could decide also on a theme too for clothing n stuff.

[Medieval Bob]

that could help with a few things if u could decide also on a theme too for clothing n stuff.

Here's a test render for you:

http://www.zelaron.com/gear/Solset.jpg



Isn't that a theme for clothing?